Maklarr4000

I'd like to tell you all a story I've been working on. It's been tricky to get it all down, but here it is- my first shot at the fantasy genre. I call it “Maklarr and the King”- tell me what you think. Once upon a time, there was a great King. He was well liked and respected, for he had created an impressive kingdom for himself- and anyone seeking refuge in it was welcome. Though his kingdom had fallen time and time again, the King always made sure that the kingdom would rise again, each time better than before. The people came from terrible places beyond, and they praised the King and his Knights for giving them a kingdom in wh